Poem#10 – Lummi Island, Washington
Today’s prompt comes from Sage Cohen, and it is in the form of a Mad Lib:
Lummi Island, Washington
Because I am not open to the possibility, I have the skin of a Jackfruit
that has spent its life dancing in the wind. Inside the fibrous pulp of the heart
I am torn and twisted. I cannot tell when the earth has shifted on It’s axis
even with eyes as beautiful as yours.
And when the atoms of the heart have split open like dreams
a gentle breeze will bring the scent into your garden
The yellow yarrows falling on the spinning floor are deceivers
conning each other with their drifting platitudes.
All the summers I have known have been tempered by fog
and the heavy as stone silence crossing the lines at night.
I’ve always admired people who can write this kind of poetry – abstract and intriguing. Nice work.
Excellent work, Jacque. I love the way the words set up reverberations echoed and recalled later on. It’d make a great performance piece.
Thanks for commenting guys, I appreciate it