Poem#5 – dysfunctional

Today’s prompt comes courtesy of Jeremy Edwards:

dysfunctional

we are ink blots

on a page

cue card number five

in a psychiatrist’s office

those who don’t know us

assume we’re the perfect couple

those who do

can’t believe we’re still together

whether it’s a cereal

or bacon and eggs kind of morning

you know just how i take it

and sometimes, that’s all that matters

6 Responses to “Poem#5 – dysfunctional”

this is so good! wow. okay. sleeping now.

Robin Elizabeth Sampson said this on April 6, 2011 at 2:20 am | Reply
What’s dysfunctional to some is perfectly normal to others. I like how this points that out. Good job.

EileenJ said this on April 6, 2011 at 5:31 am | Reply
What a lovely poem! Thanks for sharing, Jacque.

Emerald said this on April 6, 2011 at 11:24 pm | Reply
Thank you all for commenting and stopping by!

Jacque said this on April 7, 2011 at 4:16 am | Reply
Great, concise portrait of intimacy.

Jeremy Edwards said this on April 7, 2011 at 11:54 am | Reply
Thanks Jeremy, great drawing by the way. I really enjoyed working on this one.

Jacque said this on April 7, 2011 at 4:02 pm | Reply

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