The Gift

She lies beneath him

breath staccato

eyes closed

legs trembling

Bathed in sweat

and the sweet

afterglow

of being fucked

raw

His ego would like him to think

that this is all him

That this is

his gift to her

That when every muscle

contorted

and every synapse

illuminated with

pleasure

that it was his hands

and mouth

and cock

in all it’s supreme glory

that is responsible

for bringing her

to this sacred place

then he realizes

as she gazes up at him

a knowing smile on her face

that it is her submission

her relinquishing

of power

if only for a time

that was her gift

to him

~ by Jacque on March 1, 2011.

Oh wow. There are no words to describe how much I love this poem.

Athena said this on March 1, 2011 at 9:35 am | Reply
Thank you Athena, I’m glad you enjoyed it. Nice comments like this always make it worthwhile 😉

Jacque said this on March 1, 2011 at 6:15 pm | Reply
Very powerful and insightful.

bustaboo3 said this on April 2, 2011 at 10:26 am | Reply
- Thanks for your comment Bustaboo, and thanks for stopping by!
  
  Jacque said this on April 2, 2011 at 2:44 pm | Reply
I usually avoid erotic poetry sites. This one is different. You can write.
Hugs
x

Melody said this on April 15, 2011 at 6:46 am | Reply
- Thank you for the kind comment Melody. Oh, and thanks for posting my poem on your blog, I appreciate it!
  
  Jacque said this on April 15, 2011 at 2:38 pm | Reply
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Recommended Reading #59: Poetry, Pt. III said this on August 11, 2011 at 3:55 am | Reply
Much appreciated that you included me in your recommended reading Emerald! Thanks for the beautiful comment 🙂

Jacque said this on August 12, 2011 at 3:59 am | Reply