Six Sentence Sunday – work in progress

I’m looking forward to reading all of the authors contributions to Six Sentence Sunday!

This is my first post, it’s from a short story I’m currently working on, as yet untitled:

After what seemed like an eternity to Mark, Sarah emerged from the bathroom wearing the slinkiest black teddy he had ever seen. He could clearly see the soft outline of her breasts, and the hint of areola that peeked through the lace fabric. Her thin panties hugged her curvaceous hips, before diving south around her neatly shaved pubic mound. They had re-lived this scene a thousand times, but tonight, it was all new to him. He couldn’t remember the last time he saw her in a negligee, or smelled the sweet scent of her perfume that he now found enveloping his space, even before she made it over to the bed. With candles flickering on either side of the room, and Maxwell crooning a sexy falsetto from the cd player, she slowly crawled into the bed and laid next to him.


~ by Jacque on December 5, 2010.

16 Responses to “Six Sentence Sunday – work in progress”

  1. That is very, very sexy!

  2. A very hot evening to come. Great description!

  3. Very sensual. Nice.

  4. That was terrific. very sensuous. Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday.

  5. Very romantic.

  6. Okay, what can’t he remember? That sounds intriguing. This a great excerpt. Thanks for sharing!

  7. I can definitely feel the mood.

  8. I *love* Mark’s reaction!

  9. Oh intriguing, why doesn’t he remember the times before this? I’m hooked. The detail is great. Welcome to 6sunday!

  10. Thanks to everyone for the comments, you’ve all made me feel very welcome at Six Sentence Sunday!

  11. Oh very nice six. Love it.

  12. Very vivid. Very hot.

  13. Welcome to Six Sunday!

    A very sexy snippet you got there. Can’t wait to read more. 😀

  14. Great descriptions!

  15. Way to set the scene. Very nice. 🙂

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