Black Satin

16 Responses to “Breathless”

1. Lovely and evocative, Jacque. Thank you for sharing.

   Emerald said this on April 12, 2010 at 7:16 am | Reply

2. Totally beautiful 🙂

   Tim said this on April 12, 2010 at 1:24 pm | Reply

3. […] can read the rest of the poem here, and I hope you will. […]

   An erotic poetry blog « Tim's Naughty Bits said this on April 12, 2010 at 4:04 pm | Reply

4. I’ve posted a short extract from this on my blog, in this post, inviting people to come here to read it all—I hope that’s OK. It deserves to be read!

   Tim said this on April 12, 2010 at 4:15 pm | Reply

   • Of Course, Tim! Thank you for posting, I’m very flattered.

     Jacque said this on April 12, 2010 at 4:41 pm | Reply

     • Thanks! It was quite hard choosing the right amount to post—I wanted what I posted to make sense on its own, but make people want to come here to see the rest. I hope it has that effect!

       I don’t like using other people’s material without permission, even short quotes, so I wanted to check with you.

       Tim said this on April 12, 2010 at 4:44 pm

5. This is stunning! I don’t generally like erotic poetry (probably because most of it is so poorly done) but this poem takes my breath away. The tone and the way the words have so many meanings… I’m reminded of Saul Williams. Beautiful.

   court said this on April 13, 2010 at 2:16 am | Reply

   • Thank you Court! That’s a huge compliment to be compared to Saul, his work is truly amazing.

     Jacque said this on April 13, 2010 at 4:17 am | Reply

6. i can almost hear the sighs after…two thumbs up, Jacque.

   misadulteress said this on April 18, 2010 at 3:52 am | Reply

   • Thank you so much misadulteress…
     xoxo

     Jacque said this on April 20, 2010 at 3:00 am | Reply

7. I’m pretty sure I commented on this at your other blog, but I’d do it here too. This is so lovely – I love this line – “and how do you ride a river?”

   Erobintica said this on April 21, 2010 at 8:12 pm | Reply

8. I keep returning to this poem. The questions you posed, “how do you drink from a fountain” and “how do you ride a river,” occupy my free thoughts and beg to be answered.

   court said this on April 24, 2010 at 4:38 am | Reply

   • Thank you Court, I’m humbled that the poem has made you wonder about these things:)

     Jacque said this on April 24, 2010 at 6:43 pm | Reply

9. YES! YES! YESSSSSS!
   thank U;-)

   CAP said this on June 6, 2010 at 11:17 pm | Reply

   • Thank U CAP!

     Jacque said this on June 7, 2010 at 12:02 am | Reply

10. […] and Answers 13 06 2010 In Breathless, Jaque posed two questions, “how do you drink from a fountain” and “how do you ride a […]

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